Dear Reader,
Our class had a new project for GT. We were to make a poem describing how weve been feeling or just a poem that has an impact on us. My poem is about my sanctuary which is my home, my feelings when im at home, what I see, and do. This makes a impact on me because theres no place like home where you can let free of worries. I also got footage of parts of my house. Something about my sanctuary is its different from all others. The looks, how it was built, and the history behind it.
The special effects on my visual affect it because my home is not a bright, happy home its darker, and cozy so I chose a more vintage, warmer effect. Descriptive titles were also added depending on what my poem would say id add a word that went with it.
I am satisfied on my results because I got to add footage of one of my favorite places in the world. The video was turned on the due day so that was a good thing. I could have made it better by making my clips more bright. Some of them were a little dark.
The special effects on my visual affect it because my home is not a bright, happy home its darker, and cozy so I chose a more vintage, warmer effect. Descriptive titles were also added depending on what my poem would say id add a word that went with it.
I am satisfied on my results because I got to add footage of one of my favorite places in the world. The video was turned on the due day so that was a good thing. I could have made it better by making my clips more bright. Some of them were a little dark.
good sounds
ReplyDeleteneeds a better lighting
good lyrics
I liked the b-roll
ReplyDeleteThe quality was quite dark
I liked the Natural sounds within the poem
Your poem was really good!
ReplyDeleteYour audio could be a little louder.
Other than that I liked your visuals.
nice audio
ReplyDeletegood b-roll
nice choice of music
Really nice song in the background.
ReplyDeleteI think the voice over is a little soft though.
But really good Poem.
Compliment: Great audio.
ReplyDeleteCriticism: a lot of the B-roll is dark.
Compliment: B-roll is matching.
Compliments:The poem itself was awesome
ReplyDeleteCriticism:Some b-roll was dark
ComplimentsThe purpose itself was also good
great job on the mountain
ReplyDeletegreat job on the night time sceen
great job on the alarm
very good b-roll. need a little louder audio.very good meaning
ReplyDeleteThe lower thirds were cool, and showed parts of the peom.
ReplyDeleteYour voice becomes louder, and softer during the poem.
The whole visual poem was very amazing overall.
You got really cool b-roll but it was a tad bit dark! I really loved your poem though!
ReplyDeleteThe effects were placed well.
ReplyDeleteThe last part seems like it got cut off.
The music fit the poem.
good b roll of what you where saying
ReplyDeletecover the cuts in the video
good words
Compliment: Your poem was really good and was recited well.
ReplyDeleteCriticism: Some of the B-Roll didn't match up.
Compliment: The B-Roll was really creative and so were your text layovers
It has good effects and b-roll
ReplyDeletethe music is not that loud
The audio is good and could hear it
The B-Roll was beautiful!!!!
ReplyDeleteThere was nothing wrong with it.
The audio was nice!
good audio
ReplyDeleteparts got cut off
great job
Good sound effects. could have lighter b-roll. Read your poem good
ReplyDeleteAudio was very clear
ReplyDeleteLighting was dark on some shots
Nicely done Nahele!!
Compliment: I loved your poem and how you recited it.
ReplyDeleteCriticism: I think you should have waited to turn off the camera when you recorded. It got cut off.
Compliment: I liked your visuals.
I like you b-roll and how it matches the audio.
ReplyDeleteYou could have evened the audio more.
I also like how you added different angles of b-roll.
The poem was very creative. Could have used some effects to make some of the visuals lighter. The idea was amazing.
ReplyDeleteVisuals were great
ReplyDeleteIts was very dark
Nice use of effects.
Very well written
ReplyDeleteIt almost sounds like your not finished
Good pictures
I really like your poem and the shots were really nice. At the end your words kind of got cut off. The shots were really nice, I liked it when you filmed the tree.
ReplyDeleteI like the different angles you shot at they were very creative
ReplyDeleteSome your shots are kinda dark and I can't really see it, and your audio could have been balanced a little
I like how you had B-roll of the alarm going off.